After the crit, I went ahead and made some amendments to some of the scenes in my Texting and Driving animation as I wanted to really work hard on it and improve it as much as possible!
This was the before scene, where I needed to change the car model as well as perhaps add a shadow into the car?
And this was the after/improved scene!
You can defintely see that the car model is different. I used one of my original car designs but tailed it to my new aesthetic. I also added the silhouette of the driver into the car so that it looks more realistic instead of a driverless car which I am really pleased with.
The next scene I needed to change was this one. I needed to make the same amendments as last time, changing the car model as well as adding drivers to the cars. This time there are two.
Here is the after!
Again, I like this quite a bit more. I decided to add a 'no entry sign' to the road ahead so that it shows why the driver is on the right side of the road. I mainly moved the driver to this side because I wanted the impact to come sooner and be more abrupt, but it looks a lot nicer in hindsight as well.
I then also made the front of this car less round and more rectangular to go with the new model. I think overall, it was a good idea to change the shape of the car for the second animation, and I will look forward to changing it again in the third!
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