These are the three adverts so far that I decided to show when presenting our work in the Lecture Theatre. I opted to put them all into one video so that they could be shown continuously and not randomly which ended up working out well!
I found it so useful to show my work on such a large scale because it allowed me to see what needed to be changed before the final crit.
- Firstly, in the Texting and Driving animation, I feel like there definitely could be a longer pause at the traffic lights, as it feels too choppy when played altogether.
- Also in that animation, when the driver picks up his phone for a second time, there is still a 'pop' in his arm which I need to fix.
- There are some bits in each animation where there are scenes that either pause at the end or in the beginning which I need to shorten to make them flow more.
- Also Hayley said that the Headlight animation could be darker, which I completely agree, especially viewing it in a dark room, it looked way too bright for the night time. I think it will also make the 'no headlights' concept make more sense.
- Perhaps I could make the no headlights animation longer? It is slightly shorter than the other two (as expected from the storyboard), but I could try and extend it a bit more.
Overall, this was so useful, especially to see whether the colours and brightness looked okay on such a big scale. I think if I make these amendments before next Thursday, I will be able to have a much improved final result.
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